Poetry – There’s Been a Mistake December 15, 2020 | marandarussell There's been a mistake somewhere. This is not how it was all supposed to go. You, over there laughing as I prick my finger on verbal razors. Me, bleeding, faking a smile wishing I could manage to be good just this once. Share this:FacebookTwitterLinkedInPinterestTumblrEmailPrintLike this:Like Loading... Related
Stirring, sad, and poignant. Many can resonate with that internal feeling, along with the thoughts that kick us down. Very well-written! LikeLiked by 3 people Reply
I translated your poem into Italian C’é stato un errore C’è stato un errore da qualche parte. Non è stato come tutto dovrebbe andare. Tu, laggiù stai ridendo mentre mi pungo il dito su rasoi verbali. Io sanguinante sto simulando un sorriso desiderandoti. Potrei farcela, andare bene solo questa volta. * I will publish it on December 27 on my blog in the weekly column dedicated to the best poems read on the web. Thanks LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
♡ ALL is Well, just as it Should Be; so CHOOSE!!! Carefully, Let Go of What No Longer Serves EveryOne and Ascend to 5D in 3D, No Personal Gain …♡♡♡… LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
Powerful and poignant, Maranda! So well-written! ❤ Stay safe and take care! LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
This is so profound and touching Maranda
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Aw, thank you ♥
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You’re welcome 😉
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gorgeous poem
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Thank you so much!
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Stirring, sad, and poignant. Many can resonate with that internal feeling, along with the thoughts that kick us down. Very well-written!
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Thank you! Your kind words mean a lot to me.
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I translated your poem into Italian
C’é stato un errore
C’è stato un errore
da qualche parte.
Non è stato
come tutto
dovrebbe andare.
Tu, laggiù
stai ridendo
mentre mi pungo il dito
su rasoi verbali.
Io sanguinante
sto simulando un sorriso
desiderandoti.
Potrei farcela,
andare bene
solo questa volta.
*
I will publish it on December 27 on my blog in the weekly column dedicated to the best poems read on the web. Thanks
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That’s awesome! Thank you so much! It looks beautiful!
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Emphatic imagery in so few simple words…
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♥♥♥
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Such a powerful poem, the imagery speaks.
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Thanks so much!
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Most welcome.
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♡ ALL is Well, just as it Should Be; so CHOOSE!!! Carefully, Let Go of What No Longer Serves EveryOne and Ascend to 5D in 3D, No Personal Gain
…♡♡♡…
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Thanks!
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Powerful and poignant, Maranda! So well-written! ❤ Stay safe and take care!
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Thanks Cheryl! I appreciate your kind words!
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its certainly interesting!
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Thank you ♥
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Nicely expressed.
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Thank you!
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